At the far end of the staff colony, where you generally see manicured lawns of well-taken-care-of houses, G-Block is situated. It is a cluttered area where small blocks of houses are situated right in front of each other, and separated by miniature streams of sewage water that have sprung from under the cemented floor. Here the sweepers of the university reside. While we take care to cross, trying to prevent our dupattas and feet from getting dirty, the residents walk through it unaffected, often barefoot.
Our interest in this remote and largely ignored area was the presence of a church built in 1991.
By now a group of children had gathered around us. When we told a man that we wanted to visit the church he procured a bunch of keys from somewhere and led us to one of the doors right at our back. The door was no different from others in the area. But difference became evident as soon as we stepped in.
We were standing in the middle of a spotless white room. At the far end was the altar, with a cross on it. Elizabeth, a vibrant young girl, with heavy bangs on her head told me that they come here every Sunday.
“Do you have fun?” I asked all the kids.
Our interest in this remote and largely ignored area was the presence of a church built in 1991.
I was expecting a medium sized stone building with a dome or minaret, but here I was standing in dirty water, trying to ignore the stench coming from it so as to not offend my subjects ( the people I was talking to).
We were standing in the middle of a spotless white room. At the far end was the altar, with a cross on it. Elizabeth, a vibrant young girl, with heavy bangs on her head told me that they come here every Sunday.
“Do you have fun?” I asked all the kids.
Once inside, the children started sitting on the white floor in neat rows. Boys on one side girls on the other.
The girls told me that they clean the church everyday with their mothers. On special occasions the children get together and decorate the church with charts and ribbons.
Quite contrary to Muslim children, going to church for them was an enjoyable experience.
Here, the father was not an alien being who intimidated youngsters, and beat them up with wooden sticks, but some one they could look up to.
Maybe its time we make learning fun for our children too.
makes u wonder what else is ku hiding..
ReplyDeletei had a experience to go there wid haya baji group for some assignment.ur blog remind me that. nice one ! keep it up
ReplyDeleteHere, the father was not an alien being who intimidated youngsters, and "beat them up with wooden sticks", but some one they could look up to
ReplyDeleteEven though I know thats what happens in most of the cases but I still feel the statement to be a bit harsh...
its only in pakistan that muslim children dont like going to the masjid cuz of limiting masjid as only a place to worship rather then a community centre. Well written.
ReplyDeleteabdul hameed
'CONTRARY TO MUSLIM CHILDREN? FATHER WAS NT ALIEN??
ReplyDeletewel if u trying to say muslim children going to learn quran in madrassa shud take it as fun @also the mullah who teaches them is a alien i am sorry too harsh @very mmuch wrong judgement u hav made here but yes for assignment very gud piece of writting
It wouldn't be appropriate to calculate the differences here on the basis of religion. Good and bad people are everywhere =). Let illiteracy be the cause.
ReplyDeleteThumbs up for the reminder you left in the end.
You wrote well!
highlighted alot of deep rooted issues in our society...the article goes more deep than the writer herself acknowledges...
ReplyDeletewell probed n written abt! :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Tehmi.. i felt the same, its ofending to state.. though it happen.. but its not always.. nd it surely isnt the right thing, so we shouldn't propagate it.. apart from that, well selected, nicely put, thoughtfull message..Bravo
ReplyDeleteAfter drawing a long sketch of the environment that existed there, you kinda reached an anticlimax. I would not completely agree with you at "Quite contrary to Muslim children, going to church for them was an enjoyable experience " because this is not what generally prevails.As far as i have noticed the children are so exited being at the mosque that we have hard time calming them.The learning procedure yes perhaps might be variant for each individual though.
ReplyDeleteIt would be nice if you came up with more creative titles
ReplyDeleteWOW...i didnt know abt this church in KU...nice info there..:)...but yeah well u know wat if u come here in a christian country u will find tht not many children like going to church either and go only coz their conservative parents as they say make them do so....and often it is only old ppl that u see in church...sooo well the last sentence was a bit too generalized statement...and well i do agree with abdul guy that it is only in pakistan and specially in the madrassas that we have an enviornment tht ppl do not go to mosques....in other countires mosques r not just a worshiping place but a community centre and open for both men and women......anyways...it was a nice piece...:)
ReplyDeletei somehow do agree with the end i'd say its because of that fact that we force religion on our children and we dont let them accept it out of love for islam its because they are muslims and they should do it its more out of habit than love
ReplyDeletean amazing debate bought up :)
i found the ending a bit harsh, but the rest is amazing. i didn't know about the church in our uni. interesting info for me :)
ReplyDeletewell written!
well written! beginning is good and the explanation of the whole piece is very good but yes contrariety in the ending para is not agreeable...
ReplyDeletewell written :)
ReplyDeleteNice stuff there girl! Keep posting more work. This should have been longer though. Were you working on a word limit? Had you explained how the church session for children went along and described some details of it and the conduct of the Father, it would have been easier for us to comprehend your last point. Although a large number of molvi sahabs are not too lenient, you have to SHOW us how good the Father is by writing about him :)
ReplyDeletethanks haya for the feed back:)
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